First Beat, Sampled

[littlewing__]

Here's my first attempt at making a beat so don't be too cruel . Any tips or criticism would be greatly appreciated. Thanks alot,

John

soundcloud . com/jcharron/track-1

[Thesickkidchris]

Sounds great! I'm really surprised! Better than all my stuff :P Nothing really to say other than dope. Leave some feedback on my new beat tape? thanks!
First Beat Tape! XIII. Producing for a month!

[littlewing__]

Thanks homie, and done.

[Ace2CWB]

Well, for this to be your FIRST attempt to make a beat... this is actually really good. Lightyears ahead of the shit i first created (I promise you this) If you work more with the drumwork, you'll actually have a great beat. Keep practicing & keep grinding.

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[littlewing__]

Thanks, just like anything else, practice makes perfect I guess.

[FreshBeatzBx]

Pretty good for your 1st beat....My first beat didn't even have a flow. You should work on your mixing tho, the bass drum is kinda low can barely hear.

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[lilmagicz]

for ur first beat (Y)(Y)(Y)(Y)
go back in this dont leave it
and work on ur kick and snare make ur drums have presence this is real nice
keep doing your thing

[AllKnoing]

very nice track. a treat for the ears for sure


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[littlewing__]

Thanks for the love. Responded to your thread...

John

[mntdth]

The samples are great but as mentioned before you should work more on the drums