I like the grittyness of the sample, Drums def have potential. IMO mix should be cleaned up a bit. Carve out some space for other elements, mids could use a reduction a bit. Bottom end needs to be established. Once you do that I think it's good to go. how long have you been making beats?
Peep my the remix I did for Pharrell's Marilyn Monroe track off his new album below in my sig. Had a lot of fun making it.
First off, thanks alot for taking the time to review my track.
I usually go over the top with masterying/eq because i get too exited when producing but you're definately right mid is waay to high.
I'll fix the kick too since you're right its too hard (volume wise)
I dont understand how i can carve out some space for other
elements can you elaborate on this?
I'm gonna fix this one up first thing tomorrow morning (01:00 am here)
About your remix
I really like it allot, you got that Timbaland vibe going on
i like that.
Your mastering is good. 2:20 is hot too, i aint got much to add honestly its polished nicely
(You should send this to some blogs)
I've been making trip/hiphop on and off for 2-3 years now. been making allot of dutch house before that.
this was too chaotic and gritty for me, can barely hear what you're trying to do, however i do see potential in this. this needs to be cleaned up a bit and drums needs to be more prominent in my opinion
peace
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Yo,
Thanks for the comment yeah im gonna try and remaster this whole thing.
Your sample is awesome but it gets kind of repetitive and maybe you should add a harder kick to it (but i go overboard usually with kicks and bass
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