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[Mark Bakery]

Pretty simple, but cool beat. The drums are really nice. Maybe put some reverb over the clap/snare. Only thing I don't really like is the high sound over the snare. Maybe turn the volume of it down just a little bit. The lead is cool, but you might just cut the very low end of it to make it sound more clear. The part with the bells and choirs is nice too. Strings after that are too. I think those sounds just need a little bit mixing to make them sound better. The idea of the whole beat is great, but I think you can make it a whole lot better if you change some sounds, and add some.

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[drage21]

another nice beat, real simple melody, the drums are nice, i like the claps, them bells add a new layer to the track nice work
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