Progressive House with Vocals - New Forum User

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Jumar Music

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Hey music fans out there! I am new to this forum and happy to contribute to this EDM thread. Been doing music all life long, but recently started with electro production. This is my, ehm, second track; after I realized that my first track was miles away in sound quality from this one I decided not to post it ;-)

Appreciate your feedback, and am happy to rate your songs, too :-)

https://soundcloud.com/jumar-music/jumar-do-you-wanna-dance-original-mix

Keep up the beat!
Jumar
 
I honestly wasn't expecting something this good for your 2nd try even though you said you've been making music your whole life. I love it man. That synth that comes in at 1:15 at carries through the 2nd drop is beautiful, really cheerful. Breakdown was on point. Only critique I could give is I would've liked to hear the pulsing synth in the background throughout the track to switch up every now and then, you could try a different melody on one drop or something, but really nicely done track overall.

And thanks for leaving feedback on mine! (gave you a follow on sc btw)
 
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It's totally okay for being your second track in electro, but I can hear that you're new to this style.
The only feedback I can give you for now is to continue producing and evolve.
 
Like everyone else said, for your second track, this is cool man! As you make more music, you will get more comfortable with mixing techniques and layering, etc. I think the track itself needs a lot more "power" to it, even though it's a feel good vibe kind of thing.

I can tell you that when I was on my second track, it was shit lol. You've been music for a while, so just keep at it!

Mind giving me a listen too?
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...vel-vocal-remix-progressive-house-f4f-486409/
 
Hey guys. Appreciate your feedback! Also commented on your last songs...
 
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