new project, stuck, need help

[tenniswag50]

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[tenniswag50]

other link is broken use this one




https://soundcloud.com/tennissthemenniss/flutey-loops

 

[Wapiti]

Composition

 

[K3ACH]

i listened to the flutey loops on SC, i don't know what your necessarily needing help with in this track?
i like to start of by saying that you created an atomsphere in this track so thumbs up for that!!
i think if you worked on the bassline to make it like a techno bassline, i think it would lift off!!!

 

[Unhooked]

Great composition and sound. The only thing I am hearing and it may be intentional is a bit of distortion at the end of the lower orchestral hits. Its just an opinion but I would clean that up. Nice work otherwise.