JUST RELEASED new electronic chill track, feedback greatly appreciated!

[rek-lore]

Hey guys, looking for some feedback on my new track, just tell me how I can improve it, I'd really appreciate it, thanks!

 

[djtomswift]

I kind of feel like you should drop the vocal that comes around :33 mark. Not digging the snare drum but I like the main melody and it needs a break somewhere in there.

 

[steffeeh]

Bring up the drums and fatten them, make them punchier, snappier, and heavier, so they push the song forward and doesn't sit completely passive in the background like the do now.
Add elements as the track goes on. Add transitions and effects.