A Day Without You... Criticism Please.

[Ace2CWB]

What do you think about this track? Will return all feed. I personally think that I need to change up the drums entirely, and mix it really good, maybe a change up too... But what do you think?

Will return feed.

http://soundcloud.com/ace2cwb/a-day-without-you

[Doublecbeats]

I played this beat for my girlfriend and she said she likes it.

[BboyOn N On]

Peace- thanks for the feed man. this is nice, melody sounds good , i'm wondering , what would happen if you transposed a bar maybe before the hook , just to add another variation . a smooth bassline in there to tie it all together, and changing the high hats , they kind of sounded a little mechanical, i see your thinking of touching up the drums, the hats were the only things that stuck out to me on improving.

[L.E.B.]

i would label this a good "backbone" to a song. the melodies are right there. you definitely need some fx on that keyboard sounding guitar track. it just sounded fake. maybe a prechorus with some bouncy synth arp. a bassline.. some drops..go with your gut and give it some more powerful drums.. my $0.02..

[davemonty]

i like it, i feel some notes should be changed at certain points but thats just my preference. IMO a bassline is the biggest thing missing from making this hot. i also agree about the high hats, sounds very robotic plus its pretty much the same pattern over and over, try mixing the volumes up on them as well. as far as the overall drums are concerned i dont thnk you need to change them, they fit well, just add a bassline

[cestladore]

This is sick! The drums could use some more variation but the beat is dope!

[Snowman3300]

This is really cool. i agree the drums could use a little variation though. but very good overall

[artonius.tsetsuna]

I like it! It reminds me of Fat Jon or Nujabes. I'm listening to this on some "ok" speakers, so it may be those... But it would be nice if the bass was brought out a LITTLE more. Everything else is perfect!

[FortunateSoul]

Diggin' what you've got going on with the piano and the guitar. Only criticisms from would be the sound of the drums and lack of a bassline, but the first can be fixed with different drum samples and the second isn't that big of a deal. And my drums aren't exactly bangin', so I can't hate.

[lilmagicz]

My beat: thanks for the feedback and its up for download on my sound click the same place u listened to it

Your beat: I like the piano its very smooth and the strings accompany it nicely. The drum pattern is very nice too maybe tweak the hitats down a little bit its a little annoying to me.
Either than that this beat is very nice keep doing your thing.