CHECK OUT THE BEAT, FEEDBACK RETURNED "Only I Can Survive"

[Eulogy]

This is a beat i made a few months back, was used for a short film involving a detroit hustler with no options left, and his only escape was writing poetry and music. Dont know if they ever released the film or not, but, i do remember that i only had a short amount of time, 2 days? to come up with the song (this is instrumental only,and also it isnt mastered or anything, just raw material), i was excited and under alot of pressure, but i think for my first "real" job, as far as producing for someone, came out decent. Id appreciate any feedback that i recieve, and will also give feedback to those who respond. thanks FP Playa's...

http://soundcloud.com/anubys/only-i-can-survive

[PAPeR]

I like the piano in it and the sample in it, but I think the piano gets kind of gets repetitive. Besides that I like the fell of the track. It's smooth and simple.
Another Instrumental Feedback Returnered

[Eulogy]

I like the piano in it and the sample in it, but I think the piano gets kind of gets repetitive. Besides that I like the fell of the track. It's smooth and simple.
Another Instrumental Feedback Returnered

your right, i felt the same way about the piano, at the time i was so nervous about it not being any good, that i overlooked it, after i listened to it when i finished about 50times, that was what i noticed bothered me the most. thanks for the review! ill check yours out..