Check out THIS beat.

**starbeezy** · 07-09-2007

Here's another beat 4 y'all 2 rate. Give me some criticism! THOROBREAD 2007,ya digg

**SleepDeez** · 07-09-2007

aight...it better be good..

**starbeezy** · 07-09-2007

4 sho, thanks for tha comment

**SleepDeez** · 07-09-2007

Needs some work, the melody is really monotonous, but then again it worked for Nitty. try bringing something else in after 8 bars of the verse. i wasnt feeling the actual melody to be real, but keep up the work keep practicing and keep working hard. 1

**Triplicat3** · 07-09-2007

i feel like i'm in the dungeon in Super Mario brothers, twisted on some zoomers or some ****.
sounds dope though, not my style, but i like it.

hit me up when u get a minute
Just Shut Up and Listen to this ****...Please.

**starbeezy** · 07-09-2007

I appreciate tha comments, thanks

**starbeezy** · 07-11-2007

Can more people checkout this beat and tell me what u think?

**Upright** · 07-12-2007

Melodies and bassline are dissonant. Try using the same scale throughout your music if possible. this site should help.

http://nfo.net/MFILE/

**SilentKillah** · 07-12-2007

The beginning just seems to all clash together, rather than work together. When the beat breaks down however, it sounds good. Seems like those different melodies should be on separate songs if you ask me. The drum beat is good though.