Hey fp im just startin out and just wanting some feedbackon my work. If yall can take the time to do so it will be greatly appreciated. I will return all feedback. Thx
#1 : This one sounds pretty decent to me. I think the problem here is the drums ur using. I think If you used a better kick, it would make the beat sound better. You can try turning the Clap up a little bit too. I think you should try to work a little bit more on your drums and it'll improve this beat a lot.
Undisputed : Not really feeling the Kick drum you used for this one at all. It sounded like it was kick more for Electronica music and not too much Hip-Hop (just my opinion though). The main synth sound that goes throughout the beat is cool but it's too "trancy" for me. It's cool how you made a chorus to seperate it from the verse, which is good. I think you should spend more time on your sound selections and you'll be good to go. Keep making that music though!
the first one sounds like its lacking something though..or u just played random notes..i cant explain it but it sounds like its not connecting properly.
its sounds much like my first few beats...cause it sounds like the concept doesnt fit together ya dig? the sounds and key signature is all there but they randomly jump and the instruments dont work with each other and its like they just get brought up for no reason.
basically im just tryna say it sounds a bit random with a weird progression.
not tryna be harsh but just trna be constructive. ull grasp the idea of the structure soon though..trust me.
Checking ur myspace..Head Huntin is cool I see some potential but just not enough there yet. I think ur trying to go with something raw right? I think it has a chance try to fix it. Scarizona I thought was ur best on there. Has a ryder type. I like it. Maybe try to replace that kick though. And add some more sweeps. Good Stuff man. Check......https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/showthread.php?t=312228