
Originally Posted by
furrytoes
I basically like this because it's so different.
I have a few criticisms.
The sound choice, the strings have a soft attack but they are used in a fast attack, way... so this sounds typical of the piece. It sounds like you've picked a bunch of default sounds and "made do". Which might be exactly the case, so don't worry too much about that.
Also, I'd put more rhythm & variation in to some parts.
The high piano-like part, really nice sound, I just wouldn't keep playing 8th notes, ad-infinitum.
A nice electric guitar lead comes in around 1:00. If it was me, I'd play some weird lead melody that gives real character, but you're just playing repeated notes, around a strict, predictable chord progression.
So it's starts to lose me, is where I'm going with this.
At one point, I would have stopped listening, if I wasn't going to come back here & give feedback.
But I think you mentioned above that this is ongoing. I'd like to hear what you're planning and when it's finished.
I think your style is worth listening to.
Thanks for posting.
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