Threw my vision !! F4f

[StreetPushasEnt..]

THREW MY VISION MP3 Player SoundClick
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=blUxevazOQ4&feature=youtu.be

 

[West One]

this is smooth homie, i like the real life lyrics to, i think it could use some more feeling in the vocals because the
subject sounds like some thing that deserves some passion feel me?. i like how simple the beat is make
it easy to follow your every word.

https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/production-techniques/showcase-your-music-give-receive-feedback/west-one-world-piece-100%25-f4f-413094/#post49441307

 

[StreetPushasEnt..]

thanks fam i tryd listening to urstuff it didnt let me

 

[BL3]

- I the vocals are too low in my opinion -- turn it up!
- Try stacking your vocals (recording another take under your normal vocals saying the end word of each bar) -- it'll put emphasis on your lyrics
- Try putting more character/energy in your voice -- it feels very mechanical and forced

Keep improving man

Please return the favour!

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Thanks!

 

[The Big Shots]

StreetPushasEnt,

This is cool. I love the sample even though is very simple, it's hot. I think the drums could use a major update. They are very small and boring. The rapper is cool but sounds like he's bored and just freestyling. I think he should try to change the track into some type of song format.

Keep at it!

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Looking forward to your feedback!

Also, check out our blog where we break down today's current hits and show you exactly what chords are used!
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[StreetPushasEnt..]

for 1 fam it not a sample im playin keys and im rappen on it thanks for you time 'and im kinda exacerbated when comes to trap, but thats ur cup of tea 'and im not aiding to the industry so thanks so thats why its the way it is '' simple straight to the point

 

[The Big Shots]

StreetPushasEnt.

Your key playing is hot. I'm not stating to make it trap and trap music isn't my cup of tea. I'm just stating to put more effort in your voice because you sound like your bored. Just trying to give constructed criticism here. Return the feedback. Thanks

Check out my track/thread:
the BIG shots - "KiNGS COURT" Dirty South Record! [ALL FEEDBACK RETURNED]
Looking forward to your feedback!

Also, check out our blog where we break down today's current hits and show you exactly what chords are used!
The Big Shots

- the BIG shots

 

[StreetPushasEnt..]

thanks fam and i did listen to it didnt feel nothin from it '' was like ehh nothin new my boy '

 

[dMillionaire_Real]

this is deffintly a nice hip hop beat the shake kinda gets annoying and ur rapping gets reallly boring wen u have zero expression

return the feed!
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...eive-feedback/2-new-beats-feed-4-feed-413147/

 

[weed&beatz]

Dope thing ! Nas woulda be dope on this 1 !

 

[StreetPushasEnt..]

thanks weed beats and d- i guess u aint a rapper '' i get it the guys that make beatsthat cant rap they knock people who can i suggest trying to rapp to see how hard it iz '' instead throwing ur 2 cents and u dont know what you as a person are talking bout i suggest jump in the frame of mind of a rapper and youll see what im talikng bout otherwise u jus talking out ur ass no shots intended

---------- Post added at 08:47 PM ---------- Previous post was at 10:39 AM ----------

bump this up

---------- Post added 07-27-2012 at 02:58 PM ---------- Previous post was 07-26-2012 at 08:47 PM ----------

get at cha boy fo any collabo's