Thoughts 2008 ( Feedback Returned)

[wattabottles]

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6793628


drop in ur link guys..
thanks

 

[Tha5thElement]

In my opinion, your lines are overlapping too much in the beginning of ya verse. WOWZERS on the Sample THo! WHOO!! Nice. I like how ya hats just fade away... ain't heard that done yet. I would work on ya delivery a bit, and some of ya similes and metaphors were ehh... but nice track overall.
Rating: 7/10

Here's My Link! Please Leave Some Feedback There!: https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/showthread.php?t=261752

 

[wattabottles]

thanks bro..
still uppin more !

 

[sturdybeats]

Beats is very nice, vocals are decent too.

https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/showthread.php?t=261715

 

[` . . RED . . `]

Yeah, good beat choice. Your voice & presence on the track is good. Your bars are alittle long though, which hurts your flow. If you could shorten your bars this would sound alot better. Lyrics were cool, fit well with the vibe of the beat. It was better than i expected, you're a pretty dope emcee...just use shorter lines when its needed.

RTF : https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/showthread.php?t=262009

Stay up.

 

[40C]

intro was real nice. lyrics wasn't bad. you got a message. hook was nice too. good job

http://www.******.net/audio/1685666736a147a8/

 

[Melo Da King]

your flow is a lil long and off in the beginning.....the metas and similes were allright but nothing too unique.....the delivery is good and u have a nice rap voice....this beat is dope too....who produced it?

https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/showthread.php?t=261932
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[GameOfDeath]

Very slick intro and beat. Somber start then it picks up. Man your vocal mix is butter and that beat is loud too. Good writing I am feelin the uplifting vibe here. You flow is on point throughout. You come across as genuine on the lyrics. "Sellin my rhymes I'm not putting up an auction." Yeah feelin your love for the artform. Keep it comin.

Check a new beat of mine here
https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/showthread.php?t=262024