New pop beat "Summertime" F4F

Overall pretty nice
One thing tho.
I feel like the drums could use a little more.... added interest, they don't really change up a whole lot during the track, maybe they could gain/lose elements at some points?
 
Love it all together, but I think I can help for future songs (since if this is finished, it is more than good enough to stay the way it is IMO).

I hope I can help.

I like the core of the main synths you got going. I would say they sound a bit "too perfect" though. What I would suggest is trying to emulate analog imperfections in your digital synth. You can do this (metaphorically) a hundred different ways. One way you can do this is by adding a noise channel with a small amount of the envelope being controlled by an uber tiny oscillator waveform.

Drums are pretty snappy. Maybe try adding a "dead" kick drum before some kicks every once in a blue moon. What i mean is have a kick (can be the same one) play right before the main kick comes in. Try it at a lower volume though to avoid confusing people with the time signature and drum pattern.

When the chords start to open towards the end I would suggest adding some small wet reverb on them to create a padlike sound filling the gaps.

The bass is good but I think it needs a tiny peak in the EQ to bring out the sub a bit. Just a tiny bit though.

I am not in anyway connected to any of these videos, i just thought they could help.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TiVjHJTUPy0
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9eOX2HP-eqc

I really need help on my song and would love some feedback if you could give some.
 
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