Need feedback on a pop/commercial beat!

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Will return the favor you guys!

Any opinions? Radio friendly enough?

 

[supleezy]

i like it, definitely sounds like something britney would use these days. the siren during the chorus goes on a bit too long in my opinion, and some of the synths sound a bit cheesy but overall i'd say probably 8/10 for this genre.


https://soundcloud.com/supleezy/november-4th

 

[A_GO beats]

i like it, definitely sounds like something britney would use these days. the siren during the chorus goes on a bit too long in my opinion, and some of the synths sound a bit cheesy but overall i'd say probably 8/10 for this genre.


https://soundcloud.com/supleezy/november-4th

thx man will check u out!

 

[DannyDino]

Hey man!

Loving the structure of the song. The claps in my opinion aren't the greatest, I'd suggest using different claps. although the 4/4 clap that comes in at 1:04 are good. Also, the stops (like the one that occurs at 0:35) seems rather sudden and in my opinion don't fit in too well. It might work better with vocals over them, just something you'll have to wait and find out for. Already suggested it's rather Brittany Spears style, the intro pluck sound definitely brought Lady GaGa to mind; the actual melody and the sound used for it.

Overall good track

 

[filmgirls01]

Nice

 

[vanholden]

i like it ! it sounds very clean and professional !

can you do me a favor and rate my tracks on housecharts.net ?

Proceed
Olympia

 

[A_GO beats]

bump?