Hey! I like it. The song itself is really good.
But as for the production, I think you could've made it a bit quiter. The noise is a quite irritating - I had to turn the volume down a bit to listen to the complete song. I know it's lo-fi, but still it doesn't feel that loud when I listen to, say, Teen Suicide or some Frusciante's lo-fi drugged tapes. Sure, my opinion may be wrong - I'm not a professional engineer. But that's how it felt to me.
Still, I really like this. I can say I would definately check out your album if you are going to release one. Followed you on SC.