Revelation Riddim

amazing vibes - I think there might be a lil too much wetness in the reverb which can drown the track at times - still, i had to roll one to this.

-gd

p.s. i'm down w/ collabos - lemme know.
 
One drop drums are tight. The bassline needs improvement, you can't feel any emphasis on the drop or the 1. Bob Marley played 99% one drop on all his albums, check how family man works the drop. "one drop" is supposed to smack down babylon. Second, the bassline is muddy, try shortening the length of some of the notes to get more punch -think of the bass players fingertips rolling on the strings.
 
Blessings , I like your work too !

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Blessings and Thank you for your time and dedication , I will meditate on your and the Holy Scriptures ! By any chance , are you a bass player ?
 
Dj Boogy said:
Blessings , I like your work too !

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Blessings and Thank you for your time and dedication , I will meditate on your and the Holy Scriptures ! By any chance , are you a bass player ?
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Naw I'm a riddim guitar player, but i'm pretty comfortable composing reggae bass. To be sure, the track is strong, i think the right bass line will elevate the track to another level. Peace
 
Branzs said:
Yu kill it fam! Bless!
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God Bless

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•ЯŮGZ•;49648336 said:
Hi ,
Very nice riddim , i enjoyed these positive & uplifting vibes !

Bless
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Thank you , God Bless

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VIO said:
wouldn't mind using this for my upcomming mixtape demo
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You can download this one at https://www.facebook.com/topqualityhiphopbeats , Bless
 
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