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    New dance/dancehall track. F4F!

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    Dope vibe you got going on there, I feel like the low end of your mix should hit a little harder though but that may just be personal preference.

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    Love the contrast of bass and high vocals at the start
    the percussion is pretty cool as well
    I expected vocals to come in at 0:37
    I think the "aaa, aaa" vocal chops could use a very slow LFO on a (Low pass) and (Reverb) < Coming and going together.
    It should be as slow as, Up in 7 seconds, down in 7 seconds.
    It's also a very repetitive song
    Which means if you don't use vocals, you're dead.
    Either add more varieties or add vocals.
    well done, good song.

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    Thanks to both of you for the feedback.
    It is a repetitive song you're right. I did originally want vocals on top but it's so hard to find vocalists!
    I'd love to get someone on it, if there's anyone here?

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    I make vocals, but I'm bad at writing lyrics. See if you can find a good lyricist.

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    I don't think it needs a lot of lyrics, just a refrain repeated throughout.
    I'll see if I can find someone.
    What's your soundcloud?

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