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    I like the cumbia rhythm (dance beat) a lot. The bassline is smooth along with the beat as well. I like it, but maybe work on the short staccato type bassline notes to phase in and out a little bit (for extra flare). You can move the frequency of them from low to high and high to low if you link the frequency knob to a controller. I don't know how you produce (digitally or with analog synths), but you can alter the frequency. The piano is mixed nicely as well and has a cool melody. I like the cumbia beat a lot, its a fun danceable tune. I have a song with a cumbia style dance beat too..

    ...but can you check out this? thanks
    https://soundcloud.com/epsilonbeats/its-all-up-to-fate
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    Quote Originally Posted by Epsilon-144 View Post
    I like the cumbia rhythm (dance beat) a lot. The bassline is smooth along with the beat as well. I like it, but maybe work on the short staccato type bassline notes to phase in and out a little bit (for extra flare). You can move the frequency of them from low to high and high to low if you link the frequency knob to a controller. I don't know how you produce (digitally or with analog synths), but you can alter the frequency. The piano is mixed nicely as well and has a cool melody. I like the cumbia beat a lot, its a fun danceable tune. I have a song with a cumbia style dance beat too..

    ...but can you check out this? thanks
    https://soundcloud.com/epsilonbeats/its-all-up-to-fate
    First if all thank you very much for the feedback, as far as your song it's not like anything I'd ever heard before, I like how atmospheric it is and how your branding matches that vibe your music projects, I like the sound selection also. I just felt like something was going to hit and switch the beat up at a certain point which didn't really happen but which was probably not the direction you were going for anyway so never mind. Nice groove and thanks for your time again.

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    no problem Thank you.

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    yeah, the drums are pretty dope and the moving panning on the hats is a nice touch. I'd brighten up the piano just a hair with eq to give it a slight edge. The arrangement is really nice and keeps it moving. You might want to consider adding one more subtle element in there just to give it a little more flavor. It's nice as is, but it'd be cool to add in one more dimension. Anyways, good stuff man it's really solid for the style and I like the creativity in the bass line.

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    Quote Originally Posted by The Funk Junkie View Post
    yeah, the drums are pretty dope and the moving panning on the hats is a nice touch. I'd brighten up the piano just a hair with eq to give it a slight edge. The arrangement is really nice and keeps it moving. You might want to consider adding one more subtle element in there just to give it a little more flavor. It's nice as is, but it'd be cool to add in one more dimension. Anyways, good stuff man it's really solid for the style and I like the creativity in the bass line.

    Here's a link if you could return the feed, thanks!
    www.futureproducers.com/forums/production-techniques/showcase-your-music-give-and-receive-feedback-/rap-chill-rap-boom-bap-trap-dirty-south-etc/f4f-track-emcees-fresh-flip-classic-dilla-sample-533684/
    Thanks, I can see what you mean and will put in work based off the feedback you gave me ! I'll definitely check your track out too

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