YOYOYO need feedback for this HOOK (hook only)

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Xaylius

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Er...yeah..so here it is...


The hook is only singing, something I'm not used to doing with hiphop/rap but I thought I'd give it a shot.
The verses include rap, but need to be redone...my delivery just wasn't what i wanted it to be... and having meditated on it,
I'm not really diggin my bars either. But for now ,I just wanted to see what you guys thought. Obviously friends and family tell you that you're great...
but I need Honesty lol.
 
When you say stereoize do you mean, make it come from the background to the forefront? like...More Dry?
 
Is this really the only feedback I'm getting? Lame lol. Atleast tell me if you guys think it's good or not
 
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