Not bad for your first time. My only gripes are that the beginning melody needs something added to it, maybe another instrument playing the same melody in a lower octave. Also if your 808's could hit harder, and you add some variation to your hi-hats. Basically just be a little bit more experimental. Other than that, like I said it's not bad.
Pretty much what RDK97 was saying. Layer your main melody, work on mixing your 808 kicks better to make them hit harder, and give the hi hats more patterns. You did way better than my first beat lol. F4F on my link please:
Thanks for the comment sine pluck is hitting 7th below, my mix is messy that's why you can't hear I guess... I will work on that.
hitting hard 808 is always hard part. will work on that too bro Thanks a lot!
Thanks for the comment sine pluck is hitting 7th below, my mix is messy that's why you can't hear I guess... I will work on that.
hitting hard 808 is always hard part. will work on that too bro Thanks a lot!
Yeah it sounds like you need to spend some time learning how to mix because once you get your mixes down, your beats will sound that much better. I used to have a real hard time mixing 808 kicks myself but with time and practice they are sounding better. Definitely look up some youtube tutorials to find out how to mix them properly. Good luck!
i think theres to much verb and the 808 can be a little more isolated but the idea is pretty good. One of those tracks that should be easy for any artist to jump on and make a radio hit with. i also wouldn't use that rising synth effect, theres many other risers out there that you can use that hasn't been beat to death