You Appeared [Suddenly] Instrumental F4F

[MrMcDowell]

Hello All,

I've been working on a pretty chilled instrumental called You Appeared [Suddenly]. My main focus more than anything else has been mixing and arrangement because I feel as though those are 2 areas in which I need to improve in the most. If you have any feedback or constructive criticism I'd appreciate it. All feedback, soundcloud comments, and etc would be appreciated. Dont be afraid to follow on soundcloud aswell lol. Dont forget to link your song so I can give you feedback on it. Thank You for your time.

 

[RahBeats]

Just listened in and the sample was real dope and the way it was used could've of been better, the "just like a star" part when it drops at the 27 mark was done dope but the :38 sec drop could've been better in my opinion but I'm thinking about it if it were to be used to make a song. Nonetheless dope concept. Keep at it my g!
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[MrMcDowell]

I appreciate the feed fam. I dig the beat in your track. I feel like the mixing could help the beat and lyrics pop out even knock even more. Go back to the mix and glue the sounds together more then that track will sound even better. Keep working fam.

 

[Tomzovic]

pretty dope, nothing bad on this song you did a great job

 

[MrMcDowell]

Thank You for the feed fam

 

[KronicBeatz]

yo this is real nice man. Loving the production.. all the sound effects used in the beat are a nice touch man you did a real good job. The horns used are also really nice man! Did you record the instruments yourself?

 

[MrMcDowell]

Thank You for the feed fam! I appreciate it! and I recorded everything but the horns.

 

[tomkillsjerry]

really like the jazz influence on this track left you some soundcloud feed dope track. only crit i have is during the hook everything seems washed in reverb maybe shorten your decay ans compress your string and pad elements really diggin on this track tho.

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[kdanger]

I like this a lot man!!! great vibe and the mix is noise for me!!!


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[MrMcDowell]

Thank You for the feed guys. All feed returned.

 

[Big Charge]

Great job! I like how you use the chants. Whole track is very powerful and catchy.
And I have a question: how many time you spend on that track?

 

[MrMcDowell]

I appreciate the feed fam and I spent a good bit of time on it. A few days.

 

[TheIntangiblez]

This is dope bro! I dig the composition a lot and the sound choices are real nice. It sounds like there's some cloudiness in the upper midrange probably from the sample and the pad that could be brought down a bit with some EQ...I also could hear a bit more bass and knock in the kick...really feeling it tho very catchy...I def think it's worth some additional mix work

 

[MrMcDowell]

I appreciate the feed fam

 

[namesi]

This is a killer beat bro! I really enjoyed it. I will comment on the mix though since that seems to be point of contention for you. The snare that comes in at 56 sec until 1:14 is too loud in the mix. I would also turn the bass down a smidgen. Other than that , dope af. Enjoyed this a lot.

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[MrMcDowell]

Thank you for the feed fam. All feed has been returned.

 

[Aaron Acosta]

You are excellent with this music.

The 38 second drop could use a change-up. But it's all good. No doubt one of the best tracks to listen to any time of the day..
Stays fly.

 

[fatsmug]

This track is way too cluttered for my personal taste. Not to mention the compression on this is painful to listen to. I want to hear some dynamics with samples!

 

[Aaron Acosta]

After all is said and done that compression really hurts.

 

[MrMcDowell]

Thank you for the feed fellas