I think you have a very cool idea there, I like the keys on the hook. The bassline fits well although I would muffle it a bit more. Great work on the lead as well but I would pick another sound there, something that stands out more. Same with the drum pattern, great groove but needs better samples/mixing. Definitely keep working on this idea because it could be a real banger ! That vocal was very cool as well.
Make sure to check my latest beat out as well, let me know what you think !