Critiques would be: kick and snare seem quiet. Honestly the whole track seems rather quiet, crank up that master volume. The hi hats are rather underwhelming; I would speed them up to give it a better "trap" feel. Also a little repetitive, but honestly most trap these days is haha.
It has a good vibe to it, I like the piano melody that comes in around 1:30. I feel like I could hear Cardi B on this, and with some touch-ups you could have a solid track here m8. Good work.