Travis Scott Type Beat - Funeral ( Feedback 4 Feedback

[kamby0]

Hello guys,
It's me again with my third beat, what do you guys think? I appreciate every opinion and tip
*If you're interested in buying this beat, or just want to collab : tristan.sassy@gmail.com *

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hh6aT1bU8rg

Leave a link to your thread and I'll give you my honest opinion too

 

[wildinout8]

Dark intro that really sets the tone that something is about to go down. The 808 sounds like it needs to be cleaned up just a bit so that it isn't muddy - maybe try a high-pass filter focused at 50db and brighten from there as well as some EQ...that way it will really knock and sound sharp. Nice addition of the piano for the melody as well.

Check me out at: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...uth-etc/deff-kidd-x-archangels-f4f100-513852/

 

[kamby0]

Dark intro that really sets the tone that something is about to go down. The 808 sounds like it needs to be cleaned up just a bit so that it isn't muddy - maybe try a high-pass filter focused at 50db and brighten from there as well as some EQ...that way it will really knock and sound sharp. Nice addition of the piano for the melody as well.

Check me out at: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...uth-etc/deff-kidd-x-archangels-f4f100-513852/

Alright I'll definetely try it, thank you for your tips
-I'll check it out As soon as possible)

 

[tomkillsjerry]

you can also try using a transient designer to give you kick more punch in the 808. dope beat though
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...th-etc/experimental-hip-hop-track-f4f-514106/

 

[Adlet]

Play with the equalizer, add better kick. Beat is nice, with good melody but mix is bad

 

[kamby0]

Thanks a lot

 

[kamby0]

Play with the equalizer, add better kick. Beat is nice, with good melody but mix is bad

Ye, I'll work on my mixing skills. Thank you!)
-I subbed, your work sounds dope man

 

[TheOfficialAtek]

Nice beat! I love the bass in it, and the title is fitting! If you do mind me asking, what did you use to make the twitch type movement in the video?

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PWc6xhIe10I

 

[kamby0]

Thanks a lot i made it in after effects, its easy tho but you gotta buy this exact plugin find it to download somewhere : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=At1tuZ_uHkA (HERE IS TUTORIAL HOW 2 DO IT)

-Your beats have great energy, love it. I'll subscribe tho

 

[TheOfficialAtek]

Okay, thank you I subscribed back.

 

[kamby0]

Okay, thank you I subscribed back.

no problem man

 

[playboyrichie]

Like everyone else said the mixing needs some work but you on the right path for sure I would also mess around with some audio effects so your sounds dont sound too generic...keep up the good work bruh check out my beat: Hard Trap Shit **Norway** Looking for Feedback Positive and Negative

 

[grandpadd]

definitely a travis type beat , super nice chord prog. clean overall . very good man

 

[Maizar Sky]

Your only problem is your 808 and kick. Your 808 could be a bit more contained just so it doesn't take away from the melody and your kick could do with a bit of punch.
Everything else is nice.
Keep it up!

Feedback: https://soundcloud.com/maizar-sky/blackout

 

[kamby0]

Like everyone else said the mixing needs some work but you on the right path for sure I would also mess around with some audio effects so your sounds dont sound too generic...keep up the good work bruh check out my beat: Hard Trap Shit **Norway** Looking for Feedback Positive and Negative

Ye, I'll work on it, thanks a lot!
-I'll check it out ASAP

 

[kamby0]

definitely a travis type beat , super nice chord prog. clean overall . very good man

Thanks a lot, I'm glad you liked it fam)

 

[kamby0]

Your only problem is your 808 and kick. Your 808 could be a bit more contained just so it doesn't take away from the melody and your kick could do with a bit of punch.
Everything else is nice.
Keep it up!

Feedback: https://soundcloud.com/maizar-sky/blackout

Yeah, I'll definetely work on it today! Thanks a lot)
-That beat you posted is definetely fire man! You got instant-repost and follow from me fam