Travis Scott Astroworld type Progressive Trap Beat [F4F]

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[Olie]

Hard no from me on the first bass drum that comes in, i would scrap that drum and start over - could be my personal preference though. When you chop up the drums you need to increase the attack and release (fade in/out) a few more ms so it doesn't sound so clippy. This beat is pretty bizarre and i was enjoying it in a weird way until about a minute in when it started to feel repetitive. For some reason some of the melody sounds like a Christmas song? Not sure which one. If i was you i would go back and start ripping pieces out of this song and replacing them and then add switch ups to the melody. There are a couple other things but i'll just say at the moment the song feels like a cool concept that hasn't been organised quite right.

 

[HailCaesar]

Sounds experimental I can def catch a lil Travis vibe from this I like the sound selection the sounds are dope but I agree with the user above after a while the beat got a repetitive and lol it does have a christmas song vibe I know the one Olie is talking about but I cant remember the name it sounds a lil like it but with a dark twist.

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[SPDY]

this does have a travis feel, this would be hard for someone to rap over though. the background melody is good but the main one needs to have more bounce/rhythm to it. you should try compare your beats to others on how the they drop and build up and stuff because this seems to lose direction a bit in places.
not bad though at all man

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Thanks everybody!