travø - obsessive [f4f]

travø

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hey guys.
got a new track, more rapping from me too.


thanks for listening.
drop your links below and I'll give em a listen!
 
i like the beat alot, and i like the way you sound on here for sure, but i feel like your verse wasn't quite in the pocket, that first bar was set up to flow real hard nonstop for a little while and you took it in the opposite direction. that could be an artistic choice of course, but i feel like it would have went harder with a different flow to your bars. towards the end you lost a little steam, it was a mixmatch of aggression in your words and your voice, but that can be improved the more you write. really solid song overall though, keep it up!

be honest with me here
dragon boy jig | cloud city | F4F
 
thanks for your feedback everyone.
yeah the mixing was pretty blah, the producer I was working with couldn't quite get it on point and I was actually not going to release this track as a result but whatever.
 
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