Trap Club Rap Instrumental (F4F) Prod.DBR - Foreigns (Dj mustard x Drake Type Beat )

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anaujiram

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Sup everyone , was trying to get out of my confort zone with this one and try a mixture a different style . I did use a sample for the main melody in the verse part . I had trouble mixing this one so i know it's not perfect but still lookking for advice . Let me know what you think and il return feed on your thread , soundcloud or youtube .

Thanks
 
The transition at 1:53 can be a little bit more smoother. Since you mentioned trap/club beat in your title, I think the bass needs a little bit more treble and volume. Good shit overall

Here is a Link to my youtube page, support and feedback would be greatly appreciated !
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JU7bbgWcy3E
 
I too think that the bass could be a little more present in this one. But besides that it's a great beat indeed.
Nice choice of synths and drums. I think the transition at 1:53 is nice but thats just personal opinion.

I also liked and subscribed at youtube.

Please return the Feedback by checking out my beat:
"Summer Vision" (Sampled Guitar Beat) // F4F 100%
 
BeforeDestruction said:
The transition at 1:53 can be a little bit more smoother. Since you mentioned trap/club beat in your title, I think the bass needs a little bit more treble and volume. Good shit overall

Here is a Link to my youtube page, support and feedback would be greatly appreciated !
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JU7bbgWcy3E
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Thanks man , i agree about the kick , this was the part that gave me headache the most while mixing , everything was cliping and could'nt put it louder so i know where you coming from . Left feed on your thread .
manyou said:
I too think that the bass could be a little more present in this one. But besides that it's a great beat indeed.
Nice choice of synths and drums. I think the transition at 1:53 is nice but thats just personal opinion.

I also liked and subscribed at youtube.

Please return the Feedback by checking out my beat:
"Summer Vision" (Sampled Guitar Beat) // F4F 100%
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Thanks man preciate it . Left a comment on your thread and subscribe on youtube as well . Dope track man .

riconotso said:
I like this alot. Yea, I personally don't hear anything wrong with the transitions. Is that a Drake sample?

https://soundcloud.com/rico-notso/zonin
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Thanks fam , yeah the melody in the verse part is a drake sample and kind of build around that . The rest is all original composition though . Letf a comment and like on your soundcloud . Following as well . Great track , remind me of flatbush zombies for some reason . Keep it up !
 
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Thanks man , this is dope JayOrchNY , well done all the way . Left a comment and like on yt . Subscribe as well .
 
That sample at 2:17 is dope as hell. It feels like you're changing key signature throughout the track, if that's true then try to keep it in the same key so all the parts in the beat go better together. Also add a bit more bass. Other than that its pretty dope beat.
 
Nice work overall man - I agree with a lot of what has been said on here. I do dig the sample I hear dropped in there at times. I think the bass / 808 could be a lot more present. I also think the kick just needs more bottom end to it to really move some air. The hats could probably be panned and brought up a bit which will give the whole thing more width and sparkle.

But I dig the beat!

Great job, keep it up!


Please take a listen to my latest when you have a chance: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ty-south-etc/took-back-semi-lo-fi-f4f-517483/


Cheers!
 
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