Yo! Cool beat. I think the overall level of the beat is a bit low and in my opinion this beat needs a bigger sounding 808. Something that hits your chest, you feel me? Because its a very trap inspired beat imho the 808 is a priority. Don't let not having monitors discourage you man. Just make sure you listen to it on different speakers, ear phones, head phones, car stereos, anything thats a speaker. That will help you get an accurate read on your overall mix. Keep it up!
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