- I like the boucne to the beat
- I wish the snare had a little more snap (maybe add some EQ in the higher frequencies?)
- I like the melody -- i wish it was ****ed with more (maybe cut out some frequencies so its less harsh?)
- Drum pattern is good
The 808s are nice, but when played with the kick the mix tends to get a bit muddy, I think this could be fixed by using a different kick. I love the percussion though, with the hi hats playing in triplets as well as the open hats, both panned hard left and right, it definitely makes good use of the stereo field, so good work!
Good snippet leaves off at a place nice enough that I definitely wanna hear what drop or transition you have in store.
Take the mastering tips above to heart they all gave you great advice.
Can definitely hear this at a club or concert to whoever buys the shithaha.