Suicide Attempt Number 5 [F4F]

I'm not sure if I should be critiquing the beat, vocals, or the mix. I really like the beat, but I think the low end frequencies dominate it a little too much. The vocals are back and forth for me. The parts that are closer to rapping sound better to me. I'm also not sure if it sounds a little grainy because of a bad microphone or vocal effects, but I don't think I'm too much of a fan of it. I would also turn down the vocal reverb a bit.

Overall though, it's a very dark but chill track. I really like the vibe, just make some tweaks. If you could provide feed for mine, I'd appreciate it.
(F4F) Rap, Pop Piano Instrumental | "Never Forgotten"
 
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