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    I'm not sure if I should be critiquing the beat, vocals, or the mix. I really like the beat, but I think the low end frequencies dominate it a little too much. The vocals are back and forth for me. The parts that are closer to rapping sound better to me. I'm also not sure if it sounds a little grainy because of a bad microphone or vocal effects, but I don't think I'm too much of a fan of it. I would also turn down the vocal reverb a bit.

    Overall though, it's a very dark but chill track. I really like the vibe, just make some tweaks. If you could provide feed for mine, I'd appreciate it.
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    I really dig the beat but the high end seems to be lacking a lil & the beat suits your style but tbh not really a fan of how your vocals sound well the parts when your singing it don't sound good not being rude but the parts when your like rapping thats calm.

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    Quote Originally Posted by HailCaesar View Post
    I really dig the beat but the high end seems to be lacking a lil & the beat suits your style but tbh not really a fan of how your vocals sound well the parts when your singing it don't sound good not being rude but the parts when your like rapping thats calm.

    Check out my latest.
    http://www.futureproducers.com/forum.../#post50082372
    What donít you like about the singing parts for future reference?

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    i really like the vibes on this track! i agree w the other tho the mixing could be improved. overall great track, keep it up!
    check my latest beat if you get a chance:
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