the synths & keys are very dark and ominous sounding, I like them. I like the drum sounds you've used, but think the kick could be turned down just a little bit, not by much at all.
Just out of interest have you put a limiter on the master channel? Or tried to boost the whole signal through a compressor? Something sounds like it's distorting or it could be a compressor pumping...I'm not sure but the whole track seems very loud.
This go hard! I can hear a nice mc telling a dark story...the kick knocked hard melodies were hot. Ithink it's really good beat just need some better mixing.