I really like sample it starts off with and the drums hit nice and hard though the sample. Cool sound. Pretty catchy. I wish it was longer I think it would make a pretty good song for a rapper.
Nice instrumental a lil too short to give a lot of feedback on it but I dig the lofi vibes. I think you did good on the drums the patterns are dope I know its a lofi beat but I think the bass could of sounded just a lil more cleaner just a lil if you get what I mean.
Everything apart from the kicks work. The kicks definitely have to go - they just ruin the aesthetics that the main instrumentation make. I don't have much else too add - good job!
im fucking with the smoove lofi vibes man idc what boy above me said don't get rid of your kicks wtf. switch them up more maybe but nice simple lofi pattern IMO.