For me it could have used more elements instead of that same melody looping throughout the track. The drums I had no problem with, but the kick sounded a bit rough, clean it up, but other than that the percussion was good. Also like the comment above said, raise the low ends to get a fatter bass sound, with trap tracks, bass is key. But aside all that, I think it's simple complete. It's simple, but contains all the elements for a rapper to hop on it. Keep up the work my man.