Shooting - f4f

[TD Beats]

This is a snippet of my beat called Shooting. Listen and tell me your opinion on this beat. What artist you think could fit on this beat? Please be honest.

Every feedback will returned.

 

[JayProd]

Wasn't a fan of the instrument you use at :15. It seemed out of place and didn't really fit with the rest of the beat at least to me. But the rest after that was really dope, kinda reminded me of RTJ in a way. Your drums fit well over the melody. But as a whole, to me I'd remove that instrument I stated earlier and replace it with something else. But other than that, I'm interested to hear the final beat

Check me out: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...p-dirty-south-etc/jay-prod-dreams-f4f-497267/

 

[RzRbeats]

I personally find this kinda empty,I mean the bass is good and the drums are well-mixed but it lacks instrumentation,the synth that appears at 0:15 isn't good in my opinion,you should put more instruments and take that synth off as previously said,anyway it's a snippet so I am waiting for the final result,Keep it up!

Check my beat when you have time:

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...t-lines-hell-earth-boom-bap-remix-f4f-497170/

 

[YKBN]

I think that you've got a good ideas, it keeps interesting. On the other hand you have to work on your mix and right choices about instruments. Your drums are not crispy and low end is blur.

 

[LARK]

Seems pretty erie my man, i dig it. I think you could have added some more stuff, seems a little too airy at times. All around good work tho. here's my page if you wanna listen
https://soundcloud.com/iamlark

 

[Skrimps]

Whats interesting about music is , it could sound good to one person, and bad to another.
I can see where the above posters are saying this is empty,
however, this is an instrumental.
You could add anything you want, but I still think "as is" for this could work.
You most definitely should considering adding more dynamics and fills but, this is good too keep it up.
check me when you have time
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...come-infinite-melodic-trap-follow-f4f-497306/