Secrets - [F4F](Deep/ Dark Rap)

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eandebeats

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Hey guys, I been gone a few months, still have been making music just haven't really been active on here. I got this new track that I'm really happy with and just wanted to get some of your feedback on it. All feedback will be returned. Thanks guys!

The Song:
 
Gude,

this is actually really dope! The vocals could use a bit more reverb and a slightly louder delay. Besides that they sit well in the mix and your lyrics are really nice! The only thing i dont like that much is the "breathiness" (is that a word? i dont know how to call it) in your performance. It creates a certain mood and emotion, but for me personally it sounds a bit "over the top". All in all still a killer track i really enjoyed!

If you got a minute, check my latest beat: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...t-mellow-prod-mr-nrage-f4f-544339/?highlight=
 
Mr.nRage said:
Gude,

this is actually really dope! The vocals could use a bit more reverb and a slightly louder delay. Besides that they sit well in the mix and your lyrics are really nice! The only thing i dont like that much is the "breathiness" (is that a word? i dont know how to call it) in your performance. It creates a certain mood and emotion, but for me personally it sounds a bit "over the top". All in all still a killer track i really enjoyed!

If you got a minute, check my latest beat: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...t-mellow-prod-mr-nrage-f4f-544339/?highlight=
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Thanks, man I'll definitely work on that breath thing. I'll check out your beat right now.
 
HailCaesar said:
Super dope track very clean mix and dope beat your vocals sound really nice and sit in the mix nicely I would cut of or the breathes from your voice though and increase the delay so you can hear your voice fading in the background but other than that this is a clean track.

Check out my latest.
[F4F] LUCID - Lil Skies x Lil Tracy x Lil Uzi Vert Type Beat (Collab)
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Aye thanks for the feedback! I'll definitely work on that breath problem and my delay next time. Imma check out your track .
 
I love the vocal sample and the keys on the beat, your flow is on point as well. Lyrics are solid, the delivery just needs to be a little more agressive imo especially since it's an emotional song. Overall very good, I left a like and a comment !

Make sure to visit my thread and let me know what you think, I'd be highly interested to hear what you have to say, link below :

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...p-out-now-f4f-guaranteed-544346/#post50083539
 
makingofgotham said:
I love the vocal sample and the keys on the beat, your flow is on point as well. Lyrics are solid, the delivery just needs to be a little more agressive imo especially since it's an emotional song. Overall very good, I left a like and a comment !

Make sure to visit my thread and let me know what you think, I'd be highly interested to hear what you have to say, link below :

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...p-out-now-f4f-guaranteed-544346/#post50083539
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Thanks for the feedback man!
 
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