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Thread: Remedy by Eli - Smooth/Chill Rap[F4F]

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    I like your chilled delivery - it works with the chilled vibe of the beat!! There was parts in the first section were your flow was a bit too breath-y, and that affect the flow.

    But i think the song needs a hook, it sounds like one long verse. Would have liked a switch up in your flow, too. Not bad though

    feedback on this please
    Last edited by Somasu; 2 Weeks Ago at 06:48 PM.

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