Be Real with me, y'all F4F

[LeftFieldBeats]

Sup guys made this beat and rapped over it. I'm really not crazy about the beat as whole (not really my style of dark shit) but I want that no sugarcoated criticism. what do you guys think of the rhymes, my voice and the delivery. ive been producing for like 2 years and just started getting on the mic. Feedback for feedback. lmk!

 

[SwagProductionz]

i rap and produce, gonna keep it 100... this is too plain, it didn't amaze me, gotta be a little different to stand out, and the fanbase for this type of real rap is dwindling, its not appreciated as it was, just bein real homie but anyway, peep my latest release https://www.futureproducers.com/for...e-feed-4-feed-drop-links-533415/#post50039001

 

[LeftFieldBeats]

yeah i hear you bro. i gave you some feedback on your thread. i appreciate the honesty

 

[Friendlyblkman]

I agree with SwagProductionz I think the voice was a little plain. I was feelin the beat though, love the old school vibe.

 

[mustafaonthebeat]

Sup guys made this beat and rapped over it. I'm really not crazy about the beat as whole (not really my style of dark shit) but I want that no sugarcoated criticism. what do you guys think of the rhymes, my voice and the delivery. ive been producing for like 2 years and just started getting on the mic. Feedback for feedback. lmk!

Like you said I wanna help you improve so tbh the vocals are weak, you can definitely get better though. I vibed with the beat, your vocal mix isn't too bad but the delivery is dull. Just listen to a lot of rap and practice

Check out my new track: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...c/post-your-music-itt-feedback-thread-533419/

 

[Bund&Grund]

Like the rap! reminds me of Commons flow.. it sounds like a ruff draft though, a proper mix would do wonders

This is us
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...c/bund-grund-charlie-f4f-533494/#post50039470

 

[jmsfj]

The mastering sounds good, the old school beat is really cool, but like a lot of other people said, it is relatively bland. But thats really the only complaint. Overall its alright! Check out my latest beat https://soundcloud.com/56john/alguem-abencoou-isso-its-true ive been producing seriously for 4 months now

 

[OGBama]

Main rule of rapping is never force yourself to vibe with a beat.

@SwagProductionz I wish cats understand that what most people think is real rap is tied to NYC localism but rap was never created to remain in any sole geographic location.