Hell yeah this is DOPE! The musicality of this is great, very ear catching and an attention grabber for sure. The beat is very clean sounding as well, mix sounds great I can't really comment on the low end (Apple laptop speakers) but from what I can hear everything sounds balanced rather nicley. Good stuff keep it yo!
YO!! This is tite! I'd actually like to make a song to this, let's work somethin' out. Here's a song with my voice on it [I'm told I rap better than I make beats, and it doesn't offend me]. Just passed 10,000 plays a few minutes ago.
the way you chopped the vocals is sick, and the mix is so clear. I don't really know what advice I could give you to improve the track, cause it's sounds pretty finished. Would be dope to hear someone spit over it tho, keep up the good work.
Check out my track when you get a chance: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...etc/new-instrumental-f4f-504912/#post49922415