Pop/Hip-Hop Beat, Feed for Feed, 24 Hrs or Less

[Prince Danny the One]

Hey guys,


Finished a new track. I think it's done but want some feedback. Tell me 1 thing you liked and 1 thing you didn't like(and how I could fix it). Don't forget to drop your link too:

 

[bigotboy]

It's actually really nice man. It feels like there's a lot going on at once in some parts, but it works great, I wouldn't change that. Personally I would add some reverb and maybe some stereo separation on the snare (or is it a tom?), and maybe on a couple other sounds too - just to give the track more fullness.

Mine: Throw A Fist [Horrorcore Rap] [F4F]

 

[Somasu]

I like the mix and I like how you layered the simple guitar chord progression with really cool and animated effects that compliment its melody. I can see this beat working well with a pop song - great job overall

Feedback on this please Psychosis [F4F]

 

[JH2K]

Sick track man, I think the best thing about it was the melody.
Can you show some love on my [FREE] Playboi Carti x YBN Nahmir Type Beat - F4F!

 

[Donta Black]

I like the light and partish vibe this beat definitely gives off, there was one sound though, that I didnt really like that much it was a sythn over the chorus that im assuming is suppose to be a sub melody but I think its off key and does more harm than help. Other than that great work! Check me out: ((FREE)) Schoolboy Q x Black Hippy ft. SZA 2017 Type Beat (F4F)

 

[bank]

I like the snares dont like the video game sounding melody you added in

 

[johnny nobody]

Nice vibe but it needs to go somewhere and develop the track a bit more. good start!!!

 

[Prince Danny the One]

Appreciate the criticism man. It's the only way to get better.

Like the beat you posted bruh. Loved the way you chopped up that sample. I wasn't feeling that little snare roll and think the beat could do with a different transition than that.

 

[Mr.nRage]

Gude,

I like the main melody and the drumwork (esp. those stereo-panning hi-hat rolls) - maybe the guitar could use a bit more variation. I think this airy pad in the chorus doesn't quite fit the melody / mood.

If you got a minute, check my new beat: Dark Halloween Trap Beat | *Demon* | prod. by Mr.nRage (Feed4Feed)