The mix could use some work. I like the drum sequencing and synth work. Nothing really pops though. I would like to hear this track finished with a proper mix and master. Nice work G. Keep at it.
I agree nothing is really making it shine. it seems just run of the mill. keep adding and taking away new patterns but nothing is giving it that "omg that's it" feeling. any suggestions?
kick could use more low end ... maybe some variation ... a nice bassline could help here ... feels like theres something missing here im not sure what it is though ... keep it up