Hi hats are brittle, the kick and snare lack serious low end energy.. whole mix sounds like its missing the low end. I like the concept, but the mix takes it down a bunch of notches.
I love the vibe! This is real hip hop...but I feel the mixing could be better. Specifically, I think there's too much high end. The hi hats and shakers need to be moved to the background a bit more. The rap is cool. You remind me of Redman (lyrically that is).
Bruh this is ultra dooope!! I would beef up the snare and kick, and maybe add a stronger bassline, but other than that, this definitely has a throwback vibe goin on with it! And the lyrics are dope as hell man keep this shit up!