Nujabes Tribute (FEEDBACK 4 FEEDBACK)

JayProd

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What's up FP fam, I decided to make another tribute to the greatest producer who's impacted my life. Tell me what you think:
 
The piano sounds great man, however you have to do better mixing on the drums so they fit in perfectly. And you should try using different kicks for some reason they sound very blurry :D but other than taht I really liked all the insturments and the vivdness of it. I'ma hit that like and follow button. Check me out too, peace.
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I kinda/slightly agree with the others that better drum mixing could be used on the kick but it's not a total problem! But excellent piano ... I mean sooo beautiful! Nice sax and etc... Keep it up

What genre of music do you find such beautiful piano playing? What did you sample?

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blackpanthermusic;4***9556 said:
Pretty good track I think, but I somehow do not like the kick.


The drums are a bit too fast in my opinion and the kick, too loud.


Otherwise great skills on the piano.


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MobBeatz;4***9562 said:
The piano sounds great man, however you have to do better mixing on the drums so they fit in perfectly. And you should try using different kicks for some reason they sound very blurry but other than taht I really liked all the insturments and the vivdness of it. I'ma hit that like and follow button. Check me out too, peace.
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The instrumentaion is layered greatly. I also enjoyed the drums, they worked well over your instrumentation. As well as the mix being clean, keep it up!
manyou;4***9585 said:
Nice Track. The Piano sounds awesome and i really like the arrangement.
As said before you should change the mixing of the drums but thats all i have to criticize.
Keep it up!


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Rapper Quote;4***9599 said:
RIP Nujabes - Feeling it, diggin the sample. Can hear Common rocking this. Only thing im not feeling is the horn section, the piano rolls are dope though. Good work overall fam keep doing your thing.


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TheArciDiavolo;4***9692 said:
This is dope. I like everything about it & agree tho that the drums could be a tad louder. I dig where you put them tho cuz it does draw more attention to the beauty of the instruments you got going on. Nice work my man!


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DAHTrump;4***9780 said:
I kinda/slightly agree with the others that better drum mixing could be used on the kick but it's not a total problem! But excellent piano ... I mean sooo beautiful! Nice sax and etc... Keep it up


What genre of music do you find such beautiful piano playing? What did you sample?


Would like to hear what you think of this. Left a comment on your soundcloud. Can you return the favor on this track?
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...l-symphony-hip-hop-comment-soundcloud-507778/
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Thank you all for the feedback, returned all as well :)
 
Nice sounding track, for real. I definitely hear the Nujabes influence. I liked the chords you were playing on piano too. However, the fumble of notes at the end of the phrase threw me off a bit. I'm assuming you intended to do this to add some dissonance? I also felt that the kick could be mixed more upfront, but that's just personal preference and by no means necessary.
 
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