I am the rapper not the producer. I think i have grown alot. I have studied rap alot, and i think im pretty good now. I know this sample is short, but lmk how you like it.
Sounds like the mix needs a bit of work and the vocal needs some more clarity / strength. Content is cool, however, i'd put some more "aggression" for lack of a better term into that delivery. It doesn't sound convincing enough if that makes sense. Like the direction, just my 2 cents. Return the feed when you can - https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ty-south-etc/new-record-prod-me-f4f-501299/2/
I like the melody in that intro you did to this but delivery on the verses was still a little too weak couldn't feel the emotion of what you were going for all the way. Keep at it my g!
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