Arrangement
I do like the samples you used.
The drum pattern you used is kind of boring, especially with the hats. Change it up a bit?
In the intro, the snare sounds out of place by itself. Maybe instead of just the snare, you automate a high pass filter with the drum pattern.
Mixing
I like how the chopped hats is panned.
The hats sound very robotic for this kind of style. Change up the velocity of each note.
The kick needs a bit more punch to it. Add a second kick to it that has a bit more punch to it.
The snare needs a bit more punch to it, too. Layer the snare.
I've heard better but I've heard worse. This needs some work when it comes to the mixing. I suggest looking up YouTube tutorials on mixing.
I'd like to hear more from you, soon.
Can you give me feedback on my most recent post?
