Oh shit this is legit homie... Love the somber vibe of the track. Lyrics are on point, singing on point, rapping on point. This this shit is legit af. I would say, near the end of your rap verses, be careful with losing that energy when transitioning from the rap verses to singing. I don't mean finish strong, but finish loud enough so that the dynamics of your rap vocals isn't too wide. But your flow is stellar and your singing is great man! Keep this shit up!
Production wise, great piece of work. I would maybe work on some panning work on the percussion, maybe add some cymbals next time during the break down that are panned to the side and have some reverb and delay. Other than that everything is on point with this track man! Keep this shit up!
Here's my thread. Very different than your track and not as well polished, but any feedback would be great!
