"The New Messangers" F4F Boom Bap Type Track

[Dan Smackroyd]

New track titled "the New Messangers"

Any and all feedback welcome. If you like oldschool boom bap type stuff take a listen. If youre only into the newer harder stuff, take a listen anyway. I'm more than willing to return the favor. All feedback will be returned asap.

I dont know why, but i cant find the soundcloud link button. Its only letting us post links TO soundcloud now? I guess we cant include the actual track in our posts anymore?

Either way, take a listen. Feel free to drop links to your stuff below. Thanks

The New Messangers by D A Juarez | Free Listening on SoundCloud

 

[SPDY]

the sampling is awesome man really feeling it, could hear chance on something like this. would be nice to hear a drum break down somewhere in there though. Any feed back on this would be good *F4F* Pierre Bourne x Zaytoven type beat

 

[Dan Smackroyd]

I gotchu...

And thanks. I appreciate it.

 

[JH2K]

This is dope! Good work, I like your drums a lot! Keep it up
[F4F] Post Malone x Lil Xan Type Beat - Away

 

[SoundNarcotics]

ill beat no complaints keep banging!

 

[Bourbon Boy Beats]

I always like what you bring to the table, man. The only thing I would change with this one is the verse sample, it feels like it's a bit too much especially with the hook. If you could find an instrumental sample from that song to replace it then I believe it would come together nicely and also keep the listener interested.

Keep hustling!


Lounging (80 bpm) by Bourbon Boy Beats | Free Listening on SoundCloud

 

[Dan Smackroyd]

Thank you Bourban. I appreciate it greatly. I have to agree with you on the vocal samples. They are a little too much to be a constant throughout the entire thing. Unfortunately, a good portion of this consists of different loops that already contain the vocals. Finding something to go over them without destroying the melody is something I’m not sure would work so I just decided to roll with it.
As for your track, I’m at work so I don’t have the capability to hear it as intended.
As far as the melody and structure, it sounds a little boring. What you have going on sounds alright, but I would add something to really make it bang. As it stands right now I would say it’s ALRIGHT, but I would add something else to make it a little more interesting.

Thanks to everyone else that took the time to listen. I appreciate it greatly. Keep the links coming so I can return the favor.

 

[waalex]

i think the snare feels a little lacking in low end. when the vocal sample comes in more the snare sound is too low. the sample sounds nice and loops well, there is variation - iits a good track and would sound better with a vocal over it.

return : new song feedback returned

 

[t.Based]

dope work bro. keep striving fam. check out my new hit song "Highway To Heaven"

 

[DM Promotion]

nice