Which program is that? Think the closed hi-hat is too discreet, too much dry. Like the distorted guitar and the synth you made. Kick&clap combination is fine, the clap in the back was a good shot. Good job, i kinda like it. Could you check any track on my soundcloud please?
Good composition, the highlight is def the piano. I wasn't big fan of the drums they sound stock and dry the kick needs to knock. The guitar is cool but i think it should sit more in the background.
This is best melody that I've heard today. I feel like it might sound better with a stronger snare and kick sound or maybe parallel compression on the eq.