Need critiques guys! Producer/rapper

[LeftFieldBeats]

What do you guys think of this? obviously its not finished, but I wanted some advice on my flows and rapping. Havent been doing it too long a few months, been producing for about 2 years. Hit me with links! ill follow and give feedback

 

[French Player]

The drum pattern is pretty good but the melodies are not enough catchy. You have to find a catchy loop. I think you can also improve the mixing. The flow is good, you're on the beat but the vocal is too loud compared to the beat. Keep up the good work and thank you for the feedback on my beat